Pokemon - Fomantis and Lurantis

okay critique time
To start, the linework and coloring are pretty good with the exception of the green blob background and a few messy lines here and there.
The background problem can be alleviated by choosing a good color that will pop and creating a gradient of that.

Also, the posing is too stiff and the facial expressions show little emotion; they are standing directly next to each other is good for showing a group shot is not good for just a few characters especially when they are supposed to be interacting in this way. Now back to fixing the stiff posture, the Lurantis is too strait as in the legs and back a perfectly strait. It is more natural to crouch when doing that pose.


That was long but I hope you get something from it.